Word Craft

Editing guidelines to keep in mind.

Experience Optimizations

  • Comfort read. Easily flow through the work.
    • Reflect on interesting ideas not structure
  • Reward rereading. Choose depth over simplicity to enhance the rereading experience.

Word Analysis

  • Minimize repeated words (?of what frequency?)
  • Can an alternative deepen the meaning?

Sentence analysis

  • Each is a brush stroke which, when complete, should provide something to reflect upon.
    • No unfinished thoughts
    • Each period is earned
  • Has the information been established?
    • Yes? Is it deepening the understanding?
    • Yes? Is it reactivating tension?
    • Yes? Is the refresh helpful to the reader? Is it protecting against disorientation?
    • Don’t repeat simply from fear of reader forgetfulness. Trust implication where adjacent lines already carry the meaning.
  • Emotional shifts: Not sequential, but alchemical

Paragraph analysis

  • Identify the hinge: Is it delayed unnecessarily?
    • Remember: Sometimes delay is lived thought